Honth haste hain magar mann mein bavandar kyun hai?
Aankhein soti hain par is neend mein antar kyun hai?
Jaante hain ki do tann aur ek jaan hain hum..
Phir bhi,har mod pe, doori hi muqaddar kyun hai?
Humne to saath saath chalne ki khaayi thi kasam..
Saath dekhe the sapne ,nibhaayi thi har rasm..
Humne vishwaas ki dori se khudko baandha tha..
Aaj us dor mein padti hui gaanthein kyun hain?
Jaane kabse hua shuru ,aur chalne lagaa..
Ban ke vish zindagi mein ghulne lagaa..
Ab to hum saans bhi nahi lete kabhi poori tarah..
Ek chehre par,anginat ,ye mukhaute kyun hain?
Jaane anjaane har bheed mein hi..
Dhoondhti hoon main chehra sach ka..
Khoosoorat chehron mein zara badsoorat..
Nahi milta,phir bhi bas..dhoondhati hoon..
MUKHAOTA SACH KA..?????????????
kehte hai ki sabse bada bhagya ek yatri ka hota hai jo apni yatra khatm kar leta hai but do u think ki yatra kabhi khatm bhi hoti hai :)
ReplyDeletehar soach se yatra suru hoti hai.
Well i dont know whats MUKHAOTA SACH KA but i wrote something 4-5 years ago,excerpt:
Yeh kaisi asmanjas ki saja,kaun jane satya kya
disha badlo kehta ye jahan
par kaun jaane disha hai kya
-Patankar Pramod
@ Patankar:--
ReplyDeleteChand shabdo me apne humari is rachnabadh panktiyon ko maat de di hai..... Mujhe to arth dono ka ek hi laga.... Aap mante hain satya ko koi nahi janta.... Aur main manti hun ki satya jaisi koi cheez ab dekhne ko milegi hi nahi kyonki uske mukhote milte nahi hai!!!!
Kher aapki panktiyon me ek aur baat bhi hai ...Jisse aaj ka har yuva jhug raha hai!!!! simple shabdo me kahun to har dishahin ko disha dikhane wale bahut milenge par sapne dikhane wale aur un sapno ko sanjo ke rakhne wale bahut kum milenge!!!!!! Aur is barik phark ko bahut kum log samajh pate hain ki manjil aur sapno me antar hai!!!!
Kutch jyada hi lamba gyaan de dia!!!! bt bahut aacha laga apne comment dia... Plz aage bhi mere vicharo par apni ray dete rahiye!!!
Achcha gyaan kahin se,kisi se bhi mile le lena chaiyea :)
ReplyDeleteAppreciate your thoughts.
Thank you!!!!!
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